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The Chronicles of Power

Post by Goldendercon on Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:59 am

A book I've finished writing, but I posted the prologue to see how you would continue the story(even though I've finished it, I just want to see). I don't want any stupidity, I'm ready to dish out penalties to those who aren't serious here.


The Chronicles of power

Illiuna “City of Illusions.”
Illiuna, also known as “The Fabled City”, a city of splendor, here
humans and spirits alike mingled with each other in peace and
prosperity. Although this peace and harmony would forever be disturbed
by events that right at that moment began to unfold. Solaris, guardian
of the world Daltor, was patrolling the streets of the fabled city.
Little did he know that on that very same night was a very ancient
prophecy will begin to unfold, a prophecy made by one of the greatest
chroniclers in legend, Chronicler Medranaia. A series of events so
devastating that a rift will be created between the mortal and
spiritual realms with Illiuna at its center. Archangel however, was
completely unaware of what was about to happen for he was sent to
govern the peace of Daltor long after the prophecy was made.

























TCOP

Prologue: The Treachery of Ghiddon



Solaris, guardian of the world Daltor and Incarnation of pure
light was patrolling the streets of Illiuna, a city of grace and
splendor, harmony and unity, where humans and spirits alike lived
together without the fear of wars or any kind of battle. That night a
scholar in the Crystal Tower, which houses the Eldar Crystal that
protects the entire city from any evil beings, saw a beam of blue light
shoot to the heavens from the Eldar Crystal. Knowing that this was the
first of many events in the Medranaian prophecy the scholar immediately
informed Solaris, Solaris was also puzzled about what happened but
little did he know that he would be part of a great struggle between
good and evil, a battle that would decide the fate of the world.
Meanwhile in the deepest corners of the Netherworld, Ghiddon, High
Necromancer and Lord or Darkness, who was banished to the Netherworld
in the spiritual plane, was preparing to execute a plan that he made
for the destruction of Light and all that was good. This plan was to
coincide with the Eldar Eclipse, a lunar eclipse that happens every
seven millennia caused by the power of the Eldar Crystal that
momentarily creates a rift between the two planes of reality allowing
Ghiddon to step through and separate the two planes of existence
permanently. That eclipse was to happen on that very same night. As
soon as Solaris came within full view of the Crystal Tower the eclipse
began, and Ghiddon stepped forth from the Netherworld and found
Solaris. Solaris was stunned by the greatness of the evil aura that
seeped forth from Ghiddon. He said “Take not another step forward you
fiend” Ghiddon then replied, “Who are you to try and stop me, creature
of the light, for your end is now” “We shall see whose days are
numbered, fiend!” And Solaris attacked with the fierceness of a lion
and the full glory of the light, Ghiddon raised his hands and the army
of the dead rose to serve him and attacked with all the cloying taint
of the darkness. Countless undead fell and yet rose again with the wave
of a hand, Solaris battled valiantly but alas their numbers were simply
too great and he gave the last of his energy to release an expanding
nova of pure light, and the dead rose no more. Although his effort was
in vain for Ghiddon immediately closed in and paralyzed him. As the
eclipse reached its climax Ghiddon immediately transported himself and
Solaris to the Karak’Dor Ruins.







The two arrived at the ruins at the exact moment that the light of
the red moon focused upon a red crystal at the middle of the ruins.
Letting Solaris out of his mind Ghiddon stepped up to the crystal and
began to chant:

“Moon of blood
Take this rod
By the power of the twisting nether
Divide the two planes forever”

And upon saying those lines Ghiddon presented to the crystal a
staff with an orb filled with evil energies, beams of red light
enveloped the staff and orb, lifting it above the crystal. Solaris
tried to intervene but Ghiddon immediately silenced him. When the
eclipse ended, both orb and staff broke, releasing pure evil to the
world which transformed ordinary creatures into vicious bloodthirsty
beasts. The ground around the city trembled and lifted it into the air,
the ground underneath released more evil into the world, and a rift
above the city appeared and all spirits in the mortal plane of
existence vanished. Ghiddon’s evil plan had succeeded.

But the people of Daltor did not lose hope for Chronicler
Medranaia had promised that when the three crystal flames in the cities
of Magdor, Aqueum, and Forium were lit, three heroes will be born and
there will still be hope for the world.
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Post by sniperwolf777 on Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:33 pm

It was cool... I dindt read it XD
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Post by Mooo-Gunsniper on Tue Sep 30, 2008 9:51 pm

Read it through once, I think I might like it, who knows. Razz

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Post by CaptainFluffy on Sat Oct 11, 2008 4:44 am

This was used for the storyline of the RPG thing right?
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Re: The Chronicles of Power

Post by Goldendercon on Sat Oct 11, 2008 7:20 am

well, yes but not without modification of course
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